Pitch Feedback

On a whole, the pitch presentation went well, with much positive peer to peer feedback being gained. Most people liked the use of the dancing elements within our video, with references to ballet, more specifically the film 'Black Swan'. The use of post-it notes was also admired for originality. When receiving feedback from our teacher, he pointed out specific improvements : 1)Higher levels of entropy 2) Lessen the elements of mainstream 3)Include more original elements 4)Think about lighting for the dancing